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Midterm Mark-Ups

The jury comments that I received were relating to the plans, and how I need to show a differentiation between what is opaque and what is transparent. I also need to be more systematic in the way I use the structure throughout the building, since right now, I only have certain moments occurring at certain areas. So what I really need to do from here is learn how to draw a plan and make it readable. However, some difficulties I'm having is knowing which plans I should look at or learn from. I also need to find a way to carry out the structure throughout the project in one language. I tend to work in individual spaces and then move on to another space, but I need to look at this project as a whole to avoid the piece-like nature of my building.